E- Even now I was scared of this street, determined,
innovative, hopeful, and then the sun started to peak.
I – in a rush she pulls me by the hand, stumbling down the
street past a bright red brick building. Only 4 years old, I haven’t mastered
keeping up with my mom’s steps. I looked inside the bag I carry
N- nail-polish, napkins, necklace, notebook
P – perhaps nothing I
need but that was all I took
A- all i had left to my name, not even my camera was gone.
Did she
E- ever think this is wrong? I was his twin, my eyebrows,
eyes, nose, and smile, everything about me was just like him
T- this is life. This is for the better. This is love. I
look behind me.
H- holding the stuffed animal turtle he got me closely to my
heart I got into the car
S- since then life was not the same and never will be
Part 2:
I am Stephanie
Since then life was not the same and never will be
This is life. This is for the better. This is love. .
Ever think this is wrong? I was his twin, my eyebrows,
eyes, nose, and smile, everything about me was just like him
Perhaps nothing I
need but that was all I took
Holding the stuffed animal turtle he got me closely to my
heart I got into the car
All i had left to my name, even my camera was gone.I looked inside my bag
Nail-polish, napkins, necklace, notebook
In a rush she pulls me by the hand, stumbling down the
street past a bright red brick building. Only 4 years old, I haven’t mastered
keeping up with my mom’s step. I
look behind me
Even now I was scared of this street, determined,
innovative, hopeful, and then the sun started to peak.
"In a rush she pulls me by the hand, stumbling down the street past a bright red brick building. Only 4 years old, I haven’t mastered keeping up with my mom’s step. I look behind me" this line is really powerful and I can picture it happening. I like that all of this line "Nail-polish, napkins, necklace, notebook" starts with the letter N.
ReplyDeleteI love this piece. You gave such a vivid picture and nothing you wrote was forced just because you had guidelines to follow. You gave such a strong story without needing many words.
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